Write an Application to the Principal for fee concession?

To,
            The principal,
            Govt: Degree College,
Subject: Request for fee concession.
R/Sir,
Respectfully I beg to state that my father is a clerk in Town Committee his income is hand to mouth. We are two brothers and Sisters. All of them are studying. It is therefore, very difficult for my father to pay my college fee.
You are therefore requested to grant me a free-ship and oblige. I may mention that I stood first in my class this year.

Thank you very much
                                            Yours obediently
Dated:october,8 2011   (Hafeezullah Unar)